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Marti's Top 15 Tips For Writing Killer Ad's That Sell

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1. Target market – Is the target market clearly identified? Ideally this should be in the headline e.g. Plumbers… 7 reasons why you need to…


2. Attention grabbing headline – Your headline needs to break though the clutter, people are exposed to over 60,000 advertising messages daily. E.g. Don’t buy another Ducati until you have read this…..


3. Include a loop – that encourages the reader to read further (see above)


4. Offer – Is it powerful enough to attract people away from their current supplier?

E.g. 24 months interest FREE… Pay nothing until March 2006….


5. Photo – Photo’s attract attention, ideally of people, rather than objects.


6. Benefits, and features – People buy on benefits, not features. what’s in it for them? How will they benefit from buying?

Feature – has a 9 volt spark plug. Benefit - starts every time, even in the rain


7. Specific Words… there are 16 powerful sales words in the English language e.g. FREE, NEW, YOU, SAVE…. Make these bigger and bolder


8. USP (Unique Selling Proposition) clear - What diffrentiates you from the competition? What are you competing on? Why would someone choose to do business with you?


9. Guarantee – Reduces the customer’s perceived risk of doing business with you… This should cover their key frustration about your business/industry e.g. And a money back guarantee and be specific If you are not… we will…


10. Call to action – Explain in simple terms what people need to do to use your services… e.g. Clip the coupon and bring it in to one of our stores…. Or Phone Rachael on 09 555…


11. Deadline – All decisions can be delayed, to get people to act quicker we must give them some urgency. E.g.… Offer expires Friday 25th at 5pm… or limited to first 20 customers….


12. Test and measure – Test different headlines, offers, calls to action etc… Once you find out what works (the only way is to measure the response to the ads) then run it again and again. This way you will have a self funding advertising budget. You will get sick of your ads long before you customers do.


13. Testimonials – these reduce the customer’s perceived risk of doing business with you. Write them yourself, and then ask your best clients if they will HELP you. Everyone likes to help, and this makes it easier for them, they don’t have to write anything, and you can say what you want about your business (i.e. main reason for buying your services) Include their company name, title, and ideally a photo if possible.


14. Layout – Is it attractive and enticing, does it make you want to read further. Ideally you should be on the top right hand side of a right side page.


15. Phone Numbers - Should generally be bigger, e.g. 0800 555 555 (particularly for Yellow Pages ads).

 
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Success Stories


 
"When we started out in business, we knew what it took to run a SKIDS franchise, but not how to grow the business properly. Marti's advice has been invaluable for this, holding us accountable for getting things done. Since we started working with Marti 18 months ago, we've taken on four new sites, with another 6 signed up and ready to go. Plus, we were a finalist in the Westpac Franchise Awards..."
- Dawn Engelbrecht and Bev Parsons,
Directors of SKIDS (Safe Kids in Daily Supervision)
  

  

"I've worked with Marti and been in close association with him for just over 2 years now. It's been a pleasure partnering with Marti to speak at his seminars, and he's always made the process as simple as turning up on the day. From listening to Marti present at his seminars, I can see why smart business owners would enlist his help in growing their businesses. He puts out a lot of energy, and is incredibly sharp when it comes to Marketing and Advertising.
- Cameron Brewer,
Councillor for Orakei, and former CEO of the Newmarket Business Association

"This time two years ago we were working out of my basement at home, just two of us. We now have 4 full time staff, 3 part-timers and a store in Parnell!"

-Rob Ewan, 2008, Owner of Mr Vintage


"Before hiring Marti we'd been signing up approximately 19 people a week averaging about a $30,000 turnover per week. Since working with Marti on our sales process we've been signing up approximately 43 people per week averaging $68,000 a week turnover. Marti has really turned our business around!"

- Lee Smith, Owner of Platinum Fitness


"Our turnover has more than tripled from working with Marti. Previously I had quoted 4 jobs over 6 months, since April this year and it's September now, I've quoted 46 jobs."

- Craig Shorrock, Owner of Reliant Residential

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